Writing Winning
Proposals by Brian Jeffrey, CSP
It is
sometimes appropriate, at some stage of the sale process, to provide your
prospect with a proposal. A well-done proposal can make closing the sale a lot
easier.
Some
companies expect their proposal to do the selling. This is a mistake. A
proposal is the natural conclusion of a well-thought-out and well-executed
sales process. It is a confirmation of things discussed, not a primary selling
tool.
Purpose A proposal serves three primary purposes. The first
is to confirm what was discussed during the course of the selling activities.
Second, it should explain what you are offering and outline the terms and
conditions of the sale. Third, it is your last opportunity to sell the value of
your product/services and yourself to the prospect.
This last
point shouldn't be taken too lightly as your proposal may end up being reviewed
by someone, often the final decision-maker, who was previously unavailable or
inaccessible during your initial sales presentations. This person may be seeing
your information for the first time and your ability to create a good
impression is critical.
Because
someone may be seeing your information for the first time, it is important that
the proposal be complete. There should be no unanswered questions or
unexplained terms and conditions, etc.
No
Surprises It's also important that your proposal contain no new
information and no surprises for your prospect. The proposal should capture the
essence of your discussions with the prospect, your understanding of their
situation, and confirmation of your proposed solution or offering.
It is
appropriate to include supporting collateral material even if the material
hasn't been previously seen by the prospect, providing it doesn't provide new
information that may cause the prospect to reopen the sales process.
Proposal Format There is no standard format for a proposal.
The format outlined here has been proven to be extremely effective and should
become your starting point to developing your own format for a winning
proposal.
You can
modify or delete any sections that may not be appropriate to your specific
situation but it is important to maintain the order that the sections are
presented.
Section 1: Executive Summary The executive summary is
intended to provide a concise overview to those prospects that have neither the
time nor inclination to read through the complete document.
This
section should summarize the contents of sections two, three, and four. The
executive summary may take the form of a covering letter and is usually written
last.
Section 2: Understanding of Requirements This is where you
show your understanding of the prospect's specific needs, problem, challenge,
or requirement for your product/service.
Remember,
prospects feel that the salesperson or company that best understands the
problem is likely to have the best solution. This is where you demonstrate your
understanding of their problem or situation so go into as much detail as needed
to display your understanding.
Section 3: Proposed Solutions or Recommendations You use
this section to outline the details of your offering. You should also use this
section to list the key facts and benefits required to reinforce the merits of
the prospect moving forward and accepting your proposal.
Section 4: The Investment This is the dollar-and-cents
portion of the proposal. The financial aspects of your offering should be
presented in a clear, concise manner. Check your numbers for accuracy. An error
at this stage can seriously undermine your credibility.
If
possible, include a return on investment section that shows the prospect how he
will recover his investment in a reasonable period of time. Alternately, show
how much money accepting your proposal may save.
Section 5: Corporate Information This is where you tell the
prospect why he should award you the business and basically answers the
question, "Why you?"
This
section is usually a boilerplate format and rarely changes from one proposal to
the next.
Section 6: Client List & Testimonials This section is
intended to answer the questions, "Who says so?" and "Prove it."
Like the
information in the Corporate Information section, third-party testimonials are
important in giving the prospect some comfort in knowing he is dealing with a
reputable organization. Inserting one or two appropriate testimonial letters or
a client list can go a long way to providing the prospect with peace of mind.
Section 7: Terms and Conditions This is where you outline,
in clear form, any terms or conditions that will apply to this transaction. It
is very common for this section to remain the same from one proposal to another
and can be boilerplate.
Section 8: Appendix Use this section to include any
collateral material such as brochures, marketing material, articles, and other
supporting material.
How
Long Each section should be a page onto itself. Some sections may have
a number of pages. With the possible exception of highly technical proposals,
if you follow the format we recommend above, your proposals will range from
eight to twenty pages in length depending upon the quantity of supporting
material you include in the last section.
Boilerplate As you develop your first several proposals,
you are likely to find that you are essentially saying the same thing in each
and every proposal. These are the parts that can be boilerplate and used over
and over again.
Another Set of Eyes It's extremely wise to let someone else
read over your proposal. If something is incorrect, this person is likely to
catch it before the prospect does. If something you've written doesn't make
sense to the reviewer, it won't make sense to your prospect either. Use another
set of eyes to review your proposal. You won't regret it.
Presenting Your Proposal Unless there are extenuating
circumstances, you should present your proposal in person to the prospect. This
may be your last opportunity to make a sales presentation and simply mailing
your proposal to the prospect is inappropriate.
When
making a formal presentation before a committee, be sure to have copies of your
proposal for each attendee. Before launching into your presentation, it is both
appropriate and wise to briefly poll the group to find out what things in
particular each person is interested in hearing and seeing. This will allow you
to tailor your presentation on the fly, emphasizing those parts that are of
interest and glossing over those things that are of minimal interest to the
group.
Because
people are less interested in who you are and more interested with what you can
do for them, it is wise to leave the detailed overview of your organization
until later in the presentation. Start with a brief overview (executive
summary), then move on to your understanding of the situation and the
prospect's need for what it is you are offering.
By
keeping the focus of the presentation on the prospect and his needs, you will
generate a strong level of interest on the part of the prospect.
Keep
it Simple If you use the format shown above, you will find yourself
writing a simple yet winning proposal, one that will summarize your offering
and provide the information required for the prospect to make an informed
buying decision.
Until
next time…
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